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　　1。 上高一的第一天；
　　
　　2。 英语老师刘老师面带微笑进入教室；
　　
　　3。 她自我介绍，应称呼她Miss Liu，而非Teacher Liu；
　　
　　4。 要求我们每人到教室前自我介绍；
　　
　　5。 我又怕又羞难以启齿；
　　
　　6。 老师鼓励我，我讲得很好；
　　
　　7。 难忘的第一节课；
　　
　　8。 实践出真知。遇到困难不能灰心丧气。
　　
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　　1。 词数100~140；
　　
　　2。 不要逐字翻译提示，可适当增加细节使文章连贯。
　　
　　[学生原文]
　　
　　Don’t Lose Your Heart
　　
　　Never I shall(1) forget the first English lesson at Senior One given by Miss Liu。 When she entered into(2) the classroom， we found that she was beautiful with a smile on her face。 Then she introduced herself， saying that we should call her Miss Liu instead of Teacher Liu。
　　
　　A moment later， she asked every(3) of us to go to the blackboard to say something about themselves(4) 。 When it was my turn， I felt so shyly(5) and fearful that I couldn’t speak a word out。 Miss Liu came to me and said kindly， “Don’t be afraid。 Have a try。 I believe you can do it well。” My face turned red hearing that。 At last， I went to the blackboard and was able to do it very well。
　　
　　Up to now， I can still remember her words in my English(6) lesson:“Practice makes perfect。 Never lose your heart when you meet with difficulties。 Try on and on until you succeed。”
　　
　　[名师点评]
　　
　　作者能根据提示，运用所学知识得体地进行语言表达。故事行文流畅，要点齐全。运用了复杂的语言结构，作者大胆地使用了现在分词，使短文紧凑，短文的开头使用了When。。。Then。。。，A moment later等过渡词，使用恰当，使短文情节逐层深入，作者在第二段最后使用了was able to为短文添彩。
　　
　　但有几处错误，现概括如下：
　　
　　（1）短文首句使用了倒装句，给人以深刻的印象，部分时间状语，副词提前，谓语动词应倒装，应改为Never shall I forget…。
　　
　　（2）用法错误，enter含有go into的意思，所以应删除into。
　　
　　（3）every改为each， every是形容词，each是代词。
　　
　　（4）themselves改为ourselves。因为故事使用第一人称叙述了发生在我班上的情况。
　　
　　（5）shyly改为shy。feel是系动词，应接形容词作表语。
　　
　　（6）在English前加first，表示特定的第一节英语课。
　　
　　[精品范文]
　　
　　Don’t Lose Your Courage
　　
　　Never shall I forget the first English lesson given by Miss Liu。 On that day， when she entered the classroom， we found that she was a young and beautiful lady with a big smile on her face。 Then she introduced herself saying that we should call her Miss Liu instead of Teacher Liu， a moment later， she let all of us go to the blackboard and say something about ourselves in English in turn。 When it was my turn， I felt so shy and fearful that I didn’t dare to say a word before the class。 She came up to me and said kindly， “Don’t be afraid。 I believe you can do it。 Come and have a try。” My face turned red when I heard that。 At last， I went to the blackboard and was able to do it quite well。 She praised for what I had done。 Up to now， I can still remember her words in the first English lesson: “Practice makes perfect。 Don’t lose your courage when you meet with difficulties。 Try on and on until you succeed。”
　　
　　摘自《英语优秀作文精品廊》